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The silence of night aborbs me
                as I tread this lonely road -
        my passage to dawn.

My apparent desolate surroundings
                make me feel vulnerable,
        for vulnerable is what I am -
to a wooden stake of vengeance.

The silence of night is broken.

I hear the screams of the village behind
                and it dawns upon me
        that I am not wanted.

I'm no longer absorbing the silence
                but yet my depression -
        this curse that is mine,
but I do not own.

The silence of night is broken.

My lonely road, the barren road
                ends upon me yet abruptly.
        Daylight breaks.

The violence of day absorbs me
                as I tread this lonely road -
        my passage to dawn.

Daylight breaks.
©2005-2009 ~DisguisedAgenda
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Please tell me you understand what this means... I wrote this in under 10 minutes and thought it was decent, so here it is. Critique appreciated :)

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intense

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Chi Moon Goddess
:icondisguisedagenda:
thanks :)

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Some people are a lot like Slinkies - They're not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.
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Awesome poem!! I like it....it has emotion in it, nice..lol
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np chris

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Chi Moon Goddess
:icondisguisedagenda:
Thanks :) Ya I like writing poems with symbolism like that... makes the poem a deeper read.

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Some people are a lot like Slinkies - They're not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.
:icondisguisedagenda:
thankies!

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Some people are a lot like Slinkies - They're not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.
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beautiful- easy to identify with on many different levels. Also has layers of meaning that make it fun to process.

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Seek Truth.
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I think vampire... yet at the same time... it seems like there is something more.. some hidden part of your pysche alluding to something beyond a supernatural being.

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